We're sorry, but your poem doesn't scan. (Having lovely pictures of 6 buns eating dandies is insufficient.) As far as we know, all buns enjoy dandy lions, and here we find that Benji, Chico, and Racer are not accounted for. This must be remedied forthwith.
"But But But" - Chico didn't want any, Benji was asleep in his box and Racer was AWOL. Besides, it ryhmes, has alliteration, and is extremely emotional. So go spend your time on serious scoflaws ...
Dandies are green Rabbits are fluffy My bunnies have none And boy, are they huffy.
There. Rabbit poetry. Goodnight from Virginia to Mr. and Mrs. America and all the ships at sea and some really extra cute bunnies. Night, BL! What's for dinner this weekend? We're planning pot roast.
I would say the bunns are free to invent a new form of poetry and they have done so beautifully, the photos add to the evocative repitition of the nom nom
But yes would have liked the missing bunnies to have joined in too, perhaps they're working on their own poem to be shared for another day?
A lovely poem. hee,hee,hee. Ok, maybe I like the pictures better. :) I like how dandy's twirl around when the bunnies are munching on them. Too cute. xx, shell
We think it's an excellent poem! And it even rhymes! We felt the emotion, enjoyed the imagery, and recognized the craftmanship. This chapter of the Bun Poetry Society rates it very highly.
You didn't know this but for a while Fidget had a brother, Einstein, that looked quite a bit like Zoey. A sweet little lionhead. But they didn't get along, so he went to live with a friend. He is a cutey
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We're sorry, but your poem doesn't scan. (Having lovely pictures of 6 buns eating dandies is insufficient.) As far as we know, all buns enjoy dandy lions, and here we find that Benji, Chico, and Racer are not accounted for. This must be remedied forthwith.
The Bun Poetry Police
"But But But" - Chico didn't want any, Benji was asleep in his box and Racer was AWOL. Besides, it ryhmes, has alliteration, and is extremely emotional. So go spend your time on serious scoflaws ...
THIS is rabbit poetry (not nom nom nom...):
Dandies are green
Rabbits are fluffy
My bunnies have none
And boy, are they huffy.
There. Rabbit poetry. Goodnight from Virginia to Mr. and Mrs. America and all the ships at sea and some really extra cute bunnies. Night, BL! What's for dinner this weekend? We're planning pot roast.
I would say the bunns are free to invent a new form of poetry and they have done so beautifully, the photos add to the evocative repitition of the nom nom
But yes would have liked the missing bunnies to have joined in too, perhaps they're working on their own poem to be shared for another day?
A lovely poem. hee,hee,hee. Ok, maybe I like the pictures better. :)
I like how dandy's twirl around when the bunnies are munching on them. Too cute.
xx, shell
Mickey is "nom-nom-nom"-ing some dandelions as we speak. He says any poetry regarding dandies is good poetry. :)
We think it's an excellent poem! And it even rhymes! We felt the emotion, enjoyed the imagery, and recognized the craftmanship. This chapter of the Bun Poetry Society rates it very highly.
The Bunny Bunch from NJ say "nom, nom, nom" eleven times back at you.
The buns at my house think this is an excellent poem. So do I. And we all love the photos.
Excellent poem. It must have taken days to come up with the right words.
Very beautiful poem
You didn't know this but for a while Fidget had a brother, Einstein, that looked quite a bit like Zoey. A sweet little lionhead. But they didn't get along, so he went to live with a friend. He is a cutey
I love the sound of bunnies eating greens! It must be quite the symphony of sound at A Houseful of Rabbits!
Nomming bunnies are something special -so cute! Love the poetry. Please visit our very bunny blog.
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